The next morning
Ena's Room
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Mizuki
<Also, today's been a lot of fun for some reason, and I got a ton of work done too!>
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Mafuyu
Then, I'm going home.
I have cram school starting around noon, so I need to head back and get my things.
I have cram school starting around noon, so I need to head back and get my things.
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Ena
Here, as a small token of my appreciation and since it turned out so well, you can have it.
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Ena
(I wasn't sure what to do when I heard that our theme was “incubation” since I'd never tried to draw something based on that before.)
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Mafuyu
My mom knows that things will become much harder if I don't study and do well on the entrance exams...
Ena
(I want to see you driven by your own free will to see the wide world that's out there.)
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A few days later
Art class
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Yukihira
I see.
So this is what came to mind when you heard “incubation”?
So this is what came to mind when you heard “incubation”?
Yukihira
Well...
Yukihira
First, your brushwork for the background leaves a lot to be desired. I can see that you were trying to depict daybreak, but I'm seeing blotches of colors here and there.
Yukihira
As for your figure, their joints don't seem fully connected, which gives them an unbalanced appearance. They seem so stiff that it's hard to tell what sort of pose they're trying to do.
Yukihira
But you've done a good job with the irises. I can see from there that they yearn to break free from their shell and soar into the sky.
Yukihira
And how the artist wishes to do the same.
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Yukihira
Unfortunately, Shinonome, I cannot give you a pass since you failed to finish it in the time allotted. Nonetheless, well done.
Yukihira
I hope you'll work to fix your mistakes and look forward to doing better next time.
Ena
(She probably doesn't realize it, but I also ended up learning a few things from Mafuyu.)